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ONLINE FICTION: The Breaking (Main Stream)

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Dec. 28th, 2008 | 09:55 pm
posted by: duskpeterson in warfiction

Cover for The Breaking

The prisoner knew that the Eternal Dungeon was a place where suspected criminals were broken by torture, and he was prepared to hold out against any methods used against him – except the method he could not anticipate.

"Do you have any questions?" the Seeker asked. "About the routine of the dungeon? The times you will be fed? The questions you will be asked? The instruments of torture I use?"

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Helga Gonzalez

Excelent development

from: helga1967
date: Feb. 21st, 2009 07:59 pm (UTC)

I love your work. It is wonderful how you present the characters and develop them. Everyone has their dark side. It also true that you care to presents the human side of each. It's like an interview with a psychiatrist, but that in turn is entitled to use more severe physical treatment. Thanks for sharing your story.

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Dusk Peterson

Re: Excelent development

from: duskpeterson
date: Feb. 23rd, 2009 05:51 am (UTC)

You're welcome. :)

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